"Never doubt the gullibility of clunky guards!"
~Haha, this fic had me smiling throughout the entire thing. I loved the little nuances you put into the fic such as "Bubbles" and the fact that Zidane got arrested for indecent exposure of all things. The characters were written perfectly in it: Zidane and Eiko felt like they came right out of the game, and even some of the characters you created for the fic (such as the guard Zidane cons into opening their door and the later one who lets them go) just really felt like they could easily have been NPCs in the FFIX world. Your description and characterization were awesome, and the story really flowed nicely. The ending was perfect! :D