Sazh picture:
(I-III) Rough Lineart--->Lots of Shading = 70
(IV) Torso---> *1.3 = +91
(V) N/A
(VI) Basic Background = +10
91 + 10 = 101 points

Illustrated Fic:

1st picture:
(I-III) Clean Lineart--->Medium Shading = 50
(IV) Full Body---> *1.6 = +80
(V) + 1 Full Body ---> 80 *0.6 = +48
(VI) N/A
80 + 48 = 128 points

2nd picture:
(I-III) Clean Lineart--->Medium Shading = 50
(IV) Torso---> *1.3 = +65
(V) + 1 Torso ---> 65 *0.6 = +39
(VI) N/A
65 + 39 = 104 points

3rd picture:
(I-III) Clean Lineart--->Lots of Shading = 75
(IV) Full Body---> *1.6 = +120
(V) + 1 Full Body ---> 120 *0.6 = +72
(VI) Sketchy Background ---> +10
120 + 72 + 10 = 202 points

(I hope you don't mind but I thought the detailed shading here qualified for Lots of Shading)

4th picture:
(I-III) Clean Lineart--->Medium Shading = 50
(IV) Full Body---> *1.3 = +80
(V) + 1 Full Body ---> 80 *0.6 = +48
(VI) Detailed Background ---> +25
80 + 48 + 25 = 153 points

101 + 128 + 104 + 202 + 153 = 688 points to Team Black Mage!

P.S. I love your use of lighting! <3