1. Fang's always taken care of Vanille - you expressed that well here. :-)
2. I like how you took an unassuming sound - like tinkling bells - to depict his vastly different frames of mind.
3. Yay Kain!
4. *grin* I like.
5. I'm not familiar with the subject matter, but you did a good job of catching ephemeral wisps of memory just beyond reach.
6. Hilarious! I love how they settled down at the and as if nothing happened. No harm, no foul. *laugh*

These were fun to read, both the first and second times around. :-)