First Fic: 9 Points Second Fic: 40 Points Total Points for Both Fics: 49 Points to Team Soldier! :D
Can I just say how glad I am that you have tried to write a bit more this round? :) Your writing is really good, and I love just hearing you talk about your story ideas...seeing them put down in tangible form is just awesome!
The Raffaello introspective piece was wonderfully written, and I loved how true you were to his character and his own thoughts/fears about himself. *wants to huggle Raffaello now* ♥ And I loved your Luneth story...I can see what you mean about saying how he just seems like a FF character who would fit rather naturally into the KH games given his overall personality, and I liked how you had him interacting with Vivi in this story. The bonding moments in regards to Seifer and Vivi's friendship were really touching and wonderful too (and you even managed to get Olette, Fuu, and Rai into the fic too...yay for the Twilight Town characters! ♥). Great job, really! ♥ :)
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Second Fic: 40 Points
Total Points for Both Fics: 49 Points to Team Soldier! :D
Can I just say how glad I am that you have tried to write a bit more this round? :) Your writing is really good, and I love just hearing you talk about your story ideas...seeing them put down in tangible form is just awesome!
The Raffaello introspective piece was wonderfully written, and I loved how true you were to his character and his own thoughts/fears about himself. *wants to huggle Raffaello now* ♥ And I loved your Luneth story...I can see what you mean about saying how he just seems like a FF character who would fit rather naturally into the KH games given his overall personality, and I liked how you had him interacting with Vivi in this story. The bonding moments in regards to Seifer and Vivi's friendship were really touching and wonderful too (and you even managed to get Olette, Fuu, and Rai into the fic too...yay for the Twilight Town characters! ♥). Great job, really! ♥ :)