I hate to hijack this response, but I know you'll both get the notification here.

I wholeheartedly agree! I don't know much about Rafaello or KH chars, but these little one-shots definitely made me want to learn more, and I think you have great insight into what makes these chars tick. Your writing style is smooth and flows well, and your tense structure lends itself well to the subject matter. Thank you for feeling confident enough to post!