Vaan was already making his way to the door, his hand on the knob, "I don't need her to watch out for me so much though. I already have you."

Aww...*happy-sad*

For not being a writer, you could have fooled me! ♥ The interactions, descriptive detail, and the little quirks that make the characters who they are were all very successfully portrayed. I'm a huge fan of the family theme as well, so this was a pleasure to read. Great job!