Lolz, you're welcome for the suggestion! XD I really think you're being too harsh on this fic though. It was cute! Ven~! Dissidia!Bartz~! Shelke who is one of the only characters I liked from DoC~! ...It was a seemingly random mix of characters, but they interacted really naturally together, like the other FF characters in KH do.
I especially liked the little touches you added: Bartz looking for his pirate friend and going to all the KH worlds with pirates (hehe, you should do a sequel with Faris in Port Royal once you play FFV!), Ven helping Sora (possible KH3 hinting? I'd love for Ven to come back in that game, lolz), Shelke having been separated from her sister. It all works together really well and seems very fitting for the KH games...I really enjoyed the dialogue too! It flowed really naturally and felt like how I would imagine these characters interacting with one another. And Shelke being a Lost Boy? That was genius! ♥
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who is one of the only characters I liked from DoC~! ...It was a seemingly random mix of characters, but they interacted really naturally together, like the other FF characters in KH do.I especially liked the little touches you added: Bartz looking for his pirate friend and going to all the KH worlds with pirates (hehe, you should do a sequel with Faris in Port Royal once you play FFV!), Ven helping Sora (possible KH3 hinting? I'd love for Ven to come back in that game, lolz), Shelke having been separated from her sister. It all works together really well and seems very fitting for the KH games...I really enjoyed the dialogue too! It flowed really naturally and felt like how I would imagine these characters interacting with one another. And Shelke being a Lost Boy? That was genius! ♥