I haven't played DoC but I remember reading that Shelke's body isn't able to physically mature, so the way you made her a Lost Boy and tied that in is AWESOME. And I love your Bartz (haven't played FFV either orz, but he's so cheerful and nice here). And I love how you made it so that he came to Neverland because he'd heard rumors of pirates. It seems like such a perfect detail.
Ven was super adorable too. All his blushing ahahahaha.
I enjoyed reading this a lot! I'm seconding Breyzy's suggestion for a sequel with Faris in Port Royal. XD
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I haven't played DoC but I remember reading that Shelke's body isn't able to physically mature, so the way you made her a Lost Boy and tied that in is AWESOME. And I love your Bartz (haven't played FFV either orz, but he's so cheerful and nice here). And I love how you made it so that he came to Neverland because he'd heard rumors of pirates. It seems like such a perfect detail.
Ven was super adorable too. All his blushing ahahahaha.
I enjoyed reading this a lot! I'm seconding Breyzy's suggestion for a sequel with Faris in Port Royal. XD