Oh wow, I loved reading your "what if?" fic idea. Things definitely turned out very interesting in that regard as pretty much everything turned out worse for everyone else in the long run (except Golbez who seems to get exactly what he wants regardless--makes sense considering how his story is set up). I felt so bad for Kain, the Troians, and Rosa in particular, but I really liked how you described and characterized what the changes could have been in the story had things gone differently. Very creative and well-written! ♥
And I rather liked your letter fic too. I could image Kain probably scribbling out words and changing things in such a message before ultimately deciding to destroy it. It was very in-character for him, and well-written too! :D
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Oh wow, I loved reading your "what if?" fic idea. Things definitely turned out very interesting in that regard as pretty much everything turned out worse for everyone else in the long run (except Golbez who seems to get exactly what he wants regardless--makes sense considering how his story is set up). I felt so bad for Kain, the Troians, and Rosa in particular, but I really liked how you described and characterized what the changes could have been in the story had things gone differently. Very creative and well-written! ♥
And I rather liked your letter fic too. I could image Kain probably scribbling out words and changing things in such a message before ultimately deciding to destroy it. It was very in-character for him, and well-written too! :D