I really liked this fic. Shuyin's a very interesting character, and I liked how you captured his sense of despair, guilt, and anger as he had to relive that same moment over and over again as he did...you captured how he started losing his sense of reality in a very creative way through your writing and description, and you just really feel for him while reading the story. It's very powerful, and I liked your take on the "closure" prompt. Great job! :D
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I really liked this fic. Shuyin's a very interesting character, and I liked how you captured his sense of despair, guilt, and anger as he had to relive that same moment over and over again as he did...you captured how he started losing his sense of reality in a very creative way through your writing and description, and you just really feel for him while reading the story. It's very powerful, and I liked your take on the "closure" prompt. Great job! :D