I know I already said this because I read this before you actually posted it *is sneaky!*, but I really liked how you wrote this fic! XD You really made the romance between Caraway and Julia believable and flow like how a natural relationship would...and I loved seeing into Caraway's mind here. You portrayed him almost exactly how I always imagined him to be from the little bit we see of his character in FFVIII, and seeing his thoughts on his family was really touching. I also liked how you resolved and provided closure with him and Rinoa here...something that I always felt was lacking by FFVIII's overall plot. :)

~You really managed to make Caraway feel like a genuine PERSON here, which is really hard considering he was more of a minor character in the game itself. Great job, sis! ♥ Also: kudos on finishing two prompts all at once. You've got mad prompt completing skills, hehe (and apparently, mad word count skills too!)! XD