This was really good! I'm amazed how you came up with all these details from Snow and Lightning's pasts and incorporated them into the story so effortlessly. This seems like it could be a missing scene from the game. I love the ending (the way Snow presented his last scar seems like such a Snow thing to do XD) and how you fleshed out Snow and Light's relationship, but also added some of Snow & Fang's and Lightning & Hope's as well. :)