ext_292259: (b&b - fangirls!)
ext_292259 ([identity profile] freijya.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] moogle_workshop 2011-06-21 05:51 am (UTC)

SDFJKLSALKD SQUEEEEEEEE!!

Everything I love about Lightning and Snow. Her fragility, his loving nature, their shared sense of duty, and the precarious line drawn in the sand that draws them together and divides them forever. Brother-in-law/sister-in-law relationships are so very complex, and I think you really conveyed a bonding moment, a hint of something more, but also a key point of separation. Serah brought them together. They will shoulder her between them to the bitter end.

Still, that final moment is so sweet despite its bitterness. Your Snow is so sweet and adorable and I want to squeeze him to bits. Thank you for sharing this, it was absolutely lovely!

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