~I really enjoyed reading this fic. Your description and dialogue was wonderful in it, and I could really picture the characters interacting as you had them doing. The last part with Snow and Lightning was just really fitting--and you captured everyone's relationships with one another in-character and wonderfully. Great job! ♥ :D
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~I really enjoyed reading this fic. Your description and dialogue was wonderful in it, and I could really picture the characters interacting as you had them doing. The last part with Snow and Lightning was just really fitting--and you captured everyone's relationships with one another in-character and wonderfully. Great job! ♥ :D