Excellent writing! Aerith in FFVII had so much spunk and street smarts in her and I loved that you kept some of that in your story. I also enjoyed how you explored her "not-so-innocent" side and yet still keeping her in-character.

Based on FFVII alone, I wouldn't have imagined Tseng having any sort of feelings towards Aerith (he's a turk after all, all he's concerned about is getting the job done). But after playing Crisis Core, I can definitely see him having a soft spot for her.

Great job!