Oh wow...this chapter was pretty amazing. As always, your description is incredible and I love the dynamics and interactions between all of the characters. I loved how you wrote the ending especially (with Lightning's request for Fang to watch her back and how Fang told her that they'd talk at Oerba later), but the entire chapter was just incredibly well-written! ♥ :D
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Oh wow...this chapter was pretty amazing. As always, your description is incredible and I love the dynamics and interactions between all of the characters. I loved how you wrote the ending especially (with Lightning's request for Fang to watch her back and how Fang told her that they'd talk at Oerba later), but the entire chapter was just incredibly well-written! ♥ :D