Since I kind of leave it so open-ended I'm almost tempted to write more chapters for it or something...but I'm not sure about that yet. XD ~DO IT. XD
~But, seriously, this fic was awesome! XD Lolz, I remember talking about it in the Chat when I was talking about the fics for the contests because I liked the concept and you cleverly didn't give away that it was yours...SNEAKY. Anyways, I loved that you used the concept from Fortress here...and it was extremely well-written too! I usually don't like OCs much, but you made Neesa very likable and I enjoyed her reactions to Larsa...and Larsa's character fits so well (especially considering how he acted as "Lamont" in the original FFXII!). Hehe, the added VS connection? Awesome attention to detail! Hey, if they never do Fortress...your fic will let me be happy in denial, hehe. Great job, sis! ♥
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~DO IT. XD
~But, seriously, this fic was awesome! XD Lolz, I remember talking about it in the Chat when I was talking about the fics for the contests because I liked the concept and you cleverly didn't give away that it was yours...SNEAKY. Anyways, I loved that you used the concept from Fortress here...and it was extremely well-written too! I usually don't like OCs much, but you made Neesa very likable and I enjoyed her reactions to Larsa...and Larsa's character fits so well (especially considering how he acted as "Lamont" in the original FFXII!). Hehe, the added VS connection? Awesome attention to detail! Hey, if they never do Fortress...your fic will let me be happy in denial, hehe. Great job, sis! ♥