~Oh wow...I really loved reading both of these fics. I love the story-line involving Scott, Gordon, and Hilda in FFII...and I loved the way you captured the dynamics of those relationships through Scott's thoughts: his viewpoints on both Hilda and Gordon were quite touching and very believable with what we see of his character in-game. And I absolutely adored your Aria fic too! You described the frozen world perfectly, as well as her mindset during that time...it combined into a really good introspective piece on her. Both stories were truly touching. Great job! :D
(I really hope you DO decide to continue with this "smile" prompt...I would love to see the other stories you had ideas for with it, especially since I know one of them was about Shantotto too! ♥ Hehe, I wouldn't even mind seeing some spin-off game fics with that same prompt either if you thought of any...it's a neat prompt! XD ♥)
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~Oh wow...I really loved reading both of these fics. I love the story-line involving Scott, Gordon, and Hilda in FFII...and I loved the way you captured the dynamics of those relationships through Scott's thoughts: his viewpoints on both Hilda and Gordon were quite touching and very believable with what we see of his character in-game. And I absolutely adored your Aria fic too! You described the frozen world perfectly, as well as her mindset during that time...it combined into a really good introspective piece on her. Both stories were truly touching. Great job! :D
(I really hope you DO decide to continue with this "smile" prompt...I would love to see the other stories you had ideas for with it, especially since I know one of them was about Shantotto too! ♥ Hehe, I wouldn't even mind seeing some spin-off game fics with that same prompt either if you thought of any...it's a neat prompt! XD ♥)