<3 I loved all of these. The characterization is wonderful, and they manage to be both amusing and emotional, which is a very good thing.
Being given an insight into Palom's mentality is great. In the second one, I loved how you basically incorporated their written game roles into the story. (Comic relief characters of sorts, but how they'd be interpreted upon acting that way xD) ... and the last one made me laugh and just seems so very in character.
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Being given an insight into Palom's mentality is great. In the second one, I loved how you basically incorporated their written game roles into the story. (Comic relief characters of sorts, but how they'd be interpreted upon acting that way xD) ... and the last one made me laugh and just seems so very in character.
Thank you x 100! .