ext_62578 ([identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] moogle_workshop 2011-08-21 11:22 pm (UTC)

POINTS

136 Points to Team White Mage!

I really enjoyed this fic. The way you set up the interactions between Yuffie and Vincent was really wonderful, and I liked see the other characters who showed up on occasion as well (like Yuffie's thoughts on Barret, how Reeve and Yuffe put a tracking device in Vincent's phone, and the part with Shelke ♥), it was a really neat story that flowed together and showcased how their relationship evolved over time. The ending was quite neat with how you wrote it from Vincent's POV. Great job, as always! ♥

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