Lolz, I kind of find the idea of Irvine getting struck by flying bread amusing for some reason! XD This fic was really cute and sweet...I think you did a great job showcasing what life in the orphanage was like for the FFVIII kids, which is hard to do because the game didn't focus on it too much. Good job, sis! ♥

~...My favorite part though? Totally the Squall and Selphie interaction! You wrote it perfectly. :)