ext_62578 ([identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] moogle_workshop 2011-11-13 11:57 pm (UTC)

Oh wow...I'm amazed this fic hasn't gotten any comments yet. 0_0; It's a really sweet story: I loved how you wrote Edge's character as a little kid (seems pretty fitting for him from how he's portrayed in the original game! ♥), and the interactions between him and Cuore later on were quite sweet and touching. ♥ I really liked the subtle mentioning of Rydia too, and how you wrote his attendant! This was a really nicely written story, and I'm glad that you decided to continue you your "Smile" fic collection with it. Great job, sis! ♥ :D

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