I really love the way this story is written. It's a really neat take on how Rufus was able to keep the Turks loyal to him...and I think the title pretty much sums the piece up perfectly in a way. You really captured the mindsets of the characters incredibly well (as was said before me XD), and I liked your description and how the ending was so fitting with the beginning of the story. :D
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I really love the way this story is written. It's a really neat take on how Rufus was able to keep the Turks loyal to him...and I think the title pretty much sums the piece up perfectly in a way. You really captured the mindsets of the characters incredibly well (as was said before me XD), and I liked your description and how the ending was so fitting with the beginning of the story. :D