~Oh wow...just, wow. Your writing style is so descriptive and detailed, and I loved how fluidly each sentence flowed into the other. It was a really engaging piece to read, and I loved the voice you gave to Ashe here--it all came together wonderfully from her thoughts on Vossler and the stone right up to the end with her and Basch's interaction, followed by her resolve and dreams. Absolutely wonderful! ♥
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~Oh wow...just, wow. Your writing style is so descriptive and detailed, and I loved how fluidly each sentence flowed into the other. It was a really engaging piece to read, and I loved the voice you gave to Ashe here--it all came together wonderfully from her thoughts on Vossler and the stone right up to the end with her and Basch's interaction, followed by her resolve and dreams. Absolutely wonderful! ♥