Poem: Light

[arivess.livejournal.com]

Username: arivess
Class: Thief
Title: Light
Summary: ...Uh.
Characters/Pairings: Warrior of Light/Cosmos
Word count: 107
Rating/warnings: PG; Dissidia 012 spoilers
Notes: Wrote for Sai's poetry workshop. I am never writing a sonnet again. (Or so I say.)

The name she gave, I dedicate to you,
To summon as you will, by your command
Lay waste to chaos, temper order true,
Till sanctuary covers all the land.
Without a name, I stand, your sword, your cloak,
A memory by cycles purged until
Your voice again this promise mine invokes,
My duty then, as now, your will fulfil.
Your soundless whispers in my heart I hear,
Divine your prayers, saviour, roles exchanged.
Your life you spend for us without a tear.
To overturn the rules of war arranged.
When god should fall and goddess fade to dream,
Your road I walk, your light my crystal gleam.

Comments

[breyzyyin.livejournal.com]

This was really awesome! ♥ I am in awe that you're able to rhyme so well. XD

[arivess.livejournal.com]

Thank you! XD (Rhyming dictionary go! >.>)

[freijya.livejournal.com]

WAH! This was so great! You're use of the english language was superb, and you had some really great imagery. I can't even put a favorite line, because they all flow into each other so well. Sonnets are hard, I think I've only wrote one in my life, so kudos for the awesome job!

[arivess.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :D

You should write more. <3333

[glacialphoenix]

'Tis pretty, Ariberry. It must have taken you ages!

[arivess.livejournal.com]

Thankus! It took over an hour. >.>

POINTS

[breyzyyin.livejournal.com]

9 Points to Team Thief! :D

This was a really gorgeous poem to read. I loved how the lines flowed together, and the imagery in them was really wonderful and very fitting for Warrior of Light's thoughts in regards to Cosmos. Great job, truly! ♥

Re: POINTS

[arivess.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much! <3