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glacialphoenix ([personal profile] glacialphoenix) wrote in [community profile] moogle_workshop2011-06-05 04:07 am

this is the way the world ends

Class: Black Mage
Title: not with a bang but a whimper
Summary: Locke never rescued Terra. The FFVI party never got together. This is the way the world ends. AU; title snagged from T.S. Eliot. The author blames the [livejournal.com profile] airship_lounge prompt.
Characters/Pairings: (in order) Locke, Terra, Celes, Edgar, Sabin, Cyan, Setzer, Shadow, Relm, Strago, Gau.
Word count: 209
Rating/warnings: Implied character death, so let's make that a PG?




i. the treasure hunter

Rachel does not make it through the night.

He cannot ask a dead woman for forgiveness.


ii. the esper child

She is fey and quiet and beautiful, and she leaves destruction in her wake: fire, all-consuming, ever-hungry.

They treat her with all the reverence due a prized possession.

At night, she dreams of children: mothering them, taking care of them, loving them.

She never works out why.


iii. the general

General Celes Chere disappears from sight.

The memory of her fades until she is nothing more than her name, and her name nothing more than a curse on the wind.


iv. the figaro brothers

Stone is not proof against the combined might of the Empire, and human ingenuity has a limit.

Sabin searches for his twin, and finds only rubble.


v. the knight

He searches for the Phantom Train of myth, and follows it home.

Nothing grows around Doma again.


vi. the gambler

He chases the wind, unfettered by obligations; he will touch the stars in her name.

They find the debris of an airship a year later.

Of the pilot, there is no trace.


vii. the assassin

The dog does not like strangers, and it bites hard.


viii. the girl and her grandfather

This magic? It does not exist.


ix. the wild child

The Veldt is full of animals, many of which have amazing powers of mimicry.

It is astonishing, sometimes, how like a human child they sound.

[identity profile] virago-queen.livejournal.com 2011-06-04 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Gaaaah. This was heartbreaking. ;_; Very good~

On a lighter note: Why no Mog and Umaro, Mysti? =P

[identity profile] spoonybards.livejournal.com 2011-06-04 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Simple and beautiful ♥ I've always liked some tragedy in my FF6 (since it was originally intended to have more of it?). Really enjoyed this!

[identity profile] tjemd4.livejournal.com 2011-06-04 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow -- very well written.

[identity profile] the-404-error.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
Did I mention how much I love these? <3

[identity profile] arivess.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. <3333 I especially liked Terra and Relm-and-Strago. So simple, but so poignant...

[identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
These are amazing. Very simple, but also very beautiful! Great job! ♥

[identity profile] rosehiptea.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, beautiful. I like the last one especially. And the mystery of Shadow.

[identity profile] silvr-dagger.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Here via Final Fantasy Press, and wow. These are just... wow. Poetic and intense.

POINTS

[identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com 2011-06-05 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
8 Points to Team Black Mage! :D

Oh wow...these were absolutely amazing to read. They were very beautiful and poetic, and just...very intense and detailed in their imagery (and the way you can convey emotions and sense in such small formats is truly phenomenal). Great job, as always! ♥

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-06-07 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW. These little drabbles about each character are really, REALLY good. You managed to capture such intense moments with beautiful emotion & characterization in such sparse lines and words-- I've read 2,000+ word fic that couldn't manage what you've done here so briefly and effortlessly. Did I mention that FF6 is my favorite game in the series? MY MIND IS BLOWN AGAIN BY YOUR WRITING KTHX.

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
Seriously-- I find it so hard to find decent fanfic sometimes, and then I feel like FF6&FF4 are kind-of-dead fandoms -_-; So... I get really excited when I find a fellow fan who's currently writing. Write more! :D