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moogle_workshop2011-06-20 11:41 pm
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Fic: all are one
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virago_queen
Class: Black Mage
Title: all are one
Summary: Magic isn't all Edea gave her.
Characters/Pairings: Rinoa
Word count: 463
Rating/warnings: PG-13? I guess? And general creepiness/sorceress-related stream-of-consciousness.
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virago_queenClass: Black Mage
Title: all are one
Summary: Magic isn't all Edea gave her.
Characters/Pairings: Rinoa
Word count: 463
Rating/warnings: PG-13? I guess? And general creepiness/sorceress-related stream-of-consciousness.
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I really loved your fic. It was an incredibly amazing and very original piece that really captured an intense situation in a very descriptive way. I loved how everything built on each other, how Squall and the other characters' interactions with Rinoa changed as she did, and how the stream-of-consciousness began to get an even deeper hold as the story progressed. Very dark and tragic...but powerful and really amazing to read too! :D
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