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moogle_workshop2011-07-09 08:23 am
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[Fic] More Than Herself
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mako_lies
Class: White Mage
Title: More Than Herself
Summary: Yuffie wishes people would just believe in her.
Characters: Yuffie, Godo, Cid, Vincent, Reeve
Word count: 2,222
Rating/warnings: PG-13 for violence
Author's Note: I wrote this for areyougame over on Dreamwidth for the prompt Yuffie: character study--tougher than she looks. Link is a fake-cut to my journal.
(She is Yuffie Kisaragi, and the day the world gives her a break is the day she dies.)
mako_lies Class: White Mage
Title: More Than Herself
Summary: Yuffie wishes people would just believe in her.
Characters: Yuffie, Godo, Cid, Vincent, Reeve
Word count: 2,222
Rating/warnings: PG-13 for violence
Author's Note: I wrote this for areyougame over on Dreamwidth for the prompt Yuffie: character study--tougher than she looks. Link is a fake-cut to my journal.
(She is Yuffie Kisaragi, and the day the world gives her a break is the day she dies.)
POINTS
Oh wow...this is absolutely incredible! I think you did a great job capturing Yuffie's character and story in this fic, and I liked how it showcased a progression of her character through its timeline--how her determination always remains constant throughout her life in one way or another. You did a great job capturing her in this fic (along with her relations/thoughts on other characters)--it's wonderful! ♥ :D
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