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glacialphoenix ([personal profile] glacialphoenix) wrote in [community profile] moogle_workshop2011-08-10 07:53 am

gil request fill!

Class: Black Mage
Title: under the light of the moon
Summary: For [livejournal.com profile] the_404_error's MWS-wide gil request: "In most versions of FFIV, Yang, Edward, Palom, and Porom are left behind together while Cecil and co. go to the moon. Question is, while they're off saving the world, surely the others aren't praying the whole time? Since they are rarely seen interacting with each other in the game, here's a fic question for everyone: What are those four doing while stuck there?"
Characters/Pairings: Edward, Palom, Porom, Yang
Word count: 400 in 4 drabbles
Rating/warnings: None!




i. porom


“The old man snores!”

It’s not his fault Palom’s so annoying. It really isn’t.

“Like thunder!”

All right. It is.

Because otherwise it would be someone else’s fault, and nobody should have to take that kind of blame.

“Go cast Silence on him or something!”

“The Mysidian Genius Palom can go do something about it himself,” Porom informs her brother, thwapping him upside the head from pure habit.

“I, in my brilliance, am doing something by asking you to cast Silence on him!”

Yang’s snoring is loud, but still...

“No.”

“Fine!”

She can smell something burning.

Hair?

Oh, no.

“Palom!”


ii. palom

If his sister won’t do anything about it, he will.

Besides, she just gave him express permission. Or as close to it as is necessary.

It’s not like he didn’t ask her first. Right?

Anyway, it’s only a very little fire. He can control it.

So the tiny flame creeps its way up the old man’s moustache -

“Palom!”

Spoilsport.

“You might hurt him! Put that out!”

“You can heal him if I do!”

That’s what she’s around for, right?

Put it out!”

He obliges by pouring cold water on Yang, who splutters awake.

“See,” Palom says, triumphantly, “it worked!”


iii. yang

He dreams very pleasant dreams of food. Nobody in the party can cook a decent meal. (He doesn’t believe Cecil about Rosa’s cooking; Cecil’d choke down anything she made.)

Whatever his wife’s making (he can’t tell), it smells good. Strange, but good. And the kitchen fire might be a little strong if he can feel the heat all the way from here --

Splash.

He splutters awake.

“Sorry about your moustache!” Porom says, before smacking her brother. “Apologise, Palom!”

“Sorry,” her brother says, reluctantly.

He waves them off, and tries to go back to sleep.

Wait.

Sorry about his moustache?


iv. edward

He can’t write a proper epic until he gets the whole story. Which is sort of difficult when his friends are on the moon.

He can technically write about the rest of them, although he’s not sure it’s such great source material: Yang singing a fairly bawdy song about hedgehogs before remembering that there were children with very good memories around. (He hadn’t even known Yang knew that kind of song.)

Palom setting Yang’s moustache on fire, however... well, that’s more promising.

A comic song, perhaps?

He considers this, and starts to write.

They might not kill him for this.

[identity profile] the-404-error.livejournal.com 2011-08-10 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, this is amazing! I love how the four of them flow together perfectly, and they're all very in character. It's all fantastic, but by the time I got to the part about Yang dreaming of something cooking I was cracking up. XD

I love the idea of casting silence on snoring!Yang, Yang singing brawdy songs about hedgehogs, Edward trying to make a song out of the whole incident... XD Just everything, basically. <3

+10000 points to Team Black Mage!

[identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com 2011-08-10 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
These are awesome! I love how the writing just flows together...and I was laughing so hard by the end! Great job. :)

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-08-10 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Hilarious as always!! Your drabbles never fail to disappoint. Loved this. A bawdy song about hedgehogs? LYRICS TO THIS SHOULD BE YOUR NEXT CHALLENGE

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-08-11 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, EXTREME GRAMMAR FAIL. YOU KNOW WHAT I MEANT. THEY NEVER DISAPPOINT. OH DEAR.... I'M SORRY D:

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-08-11 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
:::BANNED FROM THE COMM:::

Haha, glad you understood what I ACTUALLY meant.... and half-psychopathic characters... well. They're usually my favorite as well (though then again... how many characters in the FF universe are truly well-adjusted? I don't think there are many...).

[identity profile] deadcellredux.livejournal.com 2011-08-11 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha NPC #34, farewell. Well, insane doesn't necessarily have to be a mentioned quality. Although, even the insane/unhinged/maladjusted characters often have some redeeming or positive quality.

Unless you're like, comparing someone to Hojo or something.

Then you might have an issue.

[identity profile] naliarenegade.livejournal.com 2011-08-11 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Never played the game, but all of this seems so amusing!

POINTS

[identity profile] breyzyyin.livejournal.com 2011-08-14 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
30 Points for Team Black Mage!

(I think I tallied that right: I did 24 points for all four drabbles, and then added 6 points for the 25% point bonus for MWS-wide requests...please let me know if that is incorrect since this is my first MWS-wide gil request fic! ♥)

Ah, I loved these drabbles! It was great seeing how they connected to one another and how the entire story came out of them...and I loved just the little nuances and details that happened with all of the characters and their interactions. Excellent job, as always! ♥